• 1 Triggering Event
    Settings, Intro to Kn, GM and PP. They set sail via root canal

    - Kn wants to find PF and defeat him in his quest to Golden Nectar
    - GM wants to find his dad
    - PP wants to find his brother (hidden)


    • Searching for Umami
      Knudalce looks for a route to Umami. He asks many people only to be driven away. No one knows what it is. His food is snatched away.

      This happens in a bar.

    • Kn is obstructed by guards
      GM is tied to a pole and has been badly beaten. He was punished for stealing food. Knudalce returns at night and rescues him. He offers him food and some ointment.

    • Knudalce sat down on the bench in front of the permit
      Knudalce sat down on the bench in front of the permit issuing office. It was night time. The office was closed and the filthy officer had left hours ago. Knudalce had bought some roasted meat for his dinner. There were several thoughts racing through his head that had suppressed the sensation of hunger. The very fact that his Grandpa’s killer, Pasta Ferry, would already be on his way to Umami while he is stranded in a country that has outlawed swanews troubled him.
      Knudalce had bought a map of T...

    • Kn meets GM
      With the southern forests the home of the rebels, guards don’t allow anyone to exit through the southern gate without a permit. Kn decides to get a permit.

      The permit is a clever scheme to sell forms and ball point pens.

    • Kn finds a way out
      GM gets a thin man. He suggests that they cross root canal to reach the southern forests. Only the rebels can direct him out of Tooth.

      Mention: Where does Knudalce want to go.

    • Root canal is flooded
      The dam is released and the main channel of root canal is flushed. Knudalce and GM and PP survive the ordeal but not without the destruction of the raft. They also land up much further east near the farmlands.


  • 2 Characterization
    Introduce the EIEIO, the rebels and OMD

    - Kn is meek
    - GM is a fool
    - PP is still a mysterious character


    • JNT and JS find the escape
      Three horsemen discover trails that point out the possibility of an infiltration.

    • News infilt. ver. Rebels
      A hooded man listens carefully and meets a bartender. He asks for a relay to VLR HQ.

    • Kn, GM and PP walk
      They wake up near a coastal region. The raft is broken. (mention that) They walk south-west ward into the agri land. (mention that)

    • They meet OMD
      OMD is a lone guy working in a huge field. He explains the agri lands and invites them to stay.

    • Kn reads about OPM, OMD semons, GM sleeps
      Scene describes OMDs past. OMD had lost his wife and children.

      ToDo: Why is OMD not happy with God El? Why does he still work for God El?

    • Kn wakes up drugged
      When Knudalce woke up, his eyes were heavy, his head throbbed and he couldn’t move his arms. He looked through his barely open eyelids. Gopi Manchuri was still asleep. He wasn’t snoring and his hands and feet were tied. Knudalce realised he would be tied, too. His senses felt disjoint. He forced open his eyelids. Everything around him appeared as if they were coated with orange, pink and maroon paints.
      ‘Wha ’a ay?’ Knudalce tried to speak. In his head he had perfectly pronounced that question, y...


  • 3 First major turning
    PP is captured by VLR. Kn and GM escapes but Kn is injured by animal.

    - Kn realises that he is not safe in Tooth
    - Kn doesn’t know who his friends or foes are


    • Kn and gang is drugged
      Knudalce is transported to HQ along with GM and PP. He can see through the slot in the carriage. The carriage stops as it is attacked by a group of rebels.

      OMD knows that Kn is a swanew. He says that God El will execute him.

    • The attack
      OMD is knocked out cold. As soon as he is about to get killed, three men arrive. The rebels abandon OMD and his two sidekicks, take the chariot and ride away.

    • Kn and GM cross Gingivia
      The rebels intend to kill the three. Knudalce and GM escape into the forest. PP is taken as a prisoner.

    • Kn tells GM he needs a mentor
      Kn says how in the ancient times swanews knew a lot of forbidden techniques. That helped them combat a lot of wild animals and their nemesis.

      They are attacked by an animal and they somehow escape. Kn is wounded. GM doesn’t know how to help him.


  • 4 Exposition
    The history of swanew ban.

    - Kn shows that he doesn’t trust GM or PP
    - Kn’s backstory with Grandpa is revealed.
    - PP’s real motive for helping Kn is revealed
    - GM tells Kn about his dad. Kn doesn’t know how to react.


    • 4.2 The mentor Hungry Turkey
      The mentor invites Kn and GM.
      He works as a goat tickler.

    • 4.4 OMD mmets AW
      Alice Wonderland is introduced. El doesn’t want any chaos. She rounds up her troops and they march from HQ to the forest

      We get to know that there is a non regulated printing press (hidden - owned by PP)

    • 4.3 The mentor and the diary
      Kn shows that he has been making a lot of stuff from his Grandpa’s diary.
      He teaches Kn the principles of swanews.
      He doesn’t know who Kn’s Grandpa is.

    • JnT and JS find themselves in South
      ‘I heard that this Alice girl is pretty shrewed,’ Jugo Nor Theist said, ‘Yet, she has called us here to solve a case she couldn’t solve. Do you know what that means?’
      ‘Boss, I think it means that we are awesome,’ Jugo Shaowtest said while flipping through some samples of the pamphlets.
      The room in which the Jugo duo were sitting was was dark and smelt of an old library. A tiny lamp illuminated the table. The window on one of the sides kept the air circulation intact, otherwise Jugo Shaowest had...

    • 4.3 Attack of the VLR
      Kn and GM ventures.
      A girl attacks Kn. He is captured only to realise that he is wanted as a swanew.

    • 4.5 CB is introduced
      He is wandering in the delta when GB informs him that a swanew is caught.

      CB is annoyed that they are catching too many people.

    • JnT and JS in the south
      The scorching heat of Mr. Sun was enough to melt a kid’s ice cream before it reached their mouth. The Executive Police Officer who headed of Office of Petty Theft in Tartar and his favourite underling needed something to drink.
      ‘Oh! Look junior! They have a Gall de Liver outlet here,’ Jugo Nor Theist said, pointing to one of the larger shops situated on the beach of Mesodont, the largest town in the South-Eastern part of Toothache. ‘Oh how I wish we had a Gall de Liver outlet in Tartar, too.’
      ‘Y...

    • The story of AW
      Alice Wonderland was only nine years old when his dad left her and her mom to chase a pipe dream. To a nine year old, Alice Wonderland, this made no sense. She could not comprehend why The Wisdom Teeth of toothache had forced her father to abandon his own family? What could have been more important than a person’s own wife and daughter? In his heyday, her father was a famous poet and made substantial money being one. His poems have been published in innumerable compilations and travelling bards ...


  • 5 Connect the dots
    GM gets hold of HH. Kn sees how badly it hurts GM. Decides not to use it.

    - Kn’s life force comes handy (fs #8)
    - Kn gets to know that he can escape El without fight


    • The Underground
      In the darkness of night, El Diabolo carried two bottles of Gall de Liver’s finest ale. He knocked on the door of a house that stood alone in one of the large coconut fields located about fifty kilometres to the south of Mesodont. After the third knock, the door automatically opened. A sophisticated mechanism of pulleys and ropes was connected to the door and it was remotely operated. He entered the house, which was relatively empty except for an old cot with an even older mattress lying on it. ...

    • Old McD visits El
      ‘Old McDonald was one of those people whom God El trusted blindly. Ideally, he should not, for there wasn’t another shrewd person in his entire gang of enforcers who had the power or the ambition to take over as The Wisdom Teeth of toothache. But we, the readers know that Old McDonald had a farm and was best suited to become a farmer. He made sure that the meetings he had with God El were private. Hence, it was always held in a well ventilated reading room on the second floor of Dentine’s palati...

    • 5.1 Kn's help is needed
      Their leader suffers from diarrhea. Knudalce is asked to treat him. Knudalce notices a man drinking on the rocks. He wonders how can a bunch of drunkards save Toothache.

    • 5.2 Kn saves CB
      CB says how he has rounded up a group of rebels after El’s coup and murder of the ex-king.

      He takes him around and explains how they are planning to recapture the throne and lift the ban.

      - The great annihilation is mentioned but VRL doesn’t know much.

    • CB is finally
      It took over seven days for Captain Berty to completely heal. Gopi Manchuri had been fairing well, too and he was released from the pen along with Captain Berty’s older bodyguard. Knudalce could stay there for ages if he had not got a more important task of finding Pasta Ferry. And for that he had to escape these guys as well as Toothache. He could hope that Viva la Resistance guys wold eventually let him go free once their leader was fully healed.
      It was a bright sunny morning and Knudalce and ...

    • 5.4 Kn and GM leave
      PP is freed. PP has a small talk with GM. While Kn is busy treating VRL, he gets to know that PP has escaped with a horse.

    • Meeting the defeated
      Kn and GM travel towards the forest on foot. They have to cross the caves, then the forest and finally towards the gate.

      - They cross some caves
      - Kn notices some shiny blue rocks.

    • JNT and JS are visited by PP's gang
      The group is worried that their younger leader would be captured just like their older one.

      - They are running out of printing ink.

      PP barges in

    • JNT sends NP to EIEIO
      EIEIO attacks VLR and only few guys survive. CB is one of them. He escapes with fellows.

    • The Underground makes their move
      Mecha Traveller’s head was throbbing. He was sure it wasn’t as bad as Jugo Shaowtest. Both Mecha Traveller and El Diabolo were tied by their hands and their feet and were sitting in one corner of the room. Meanwhile, Jugo Shaowtest, with his head wrapped in bandage, sat on the cot, leaned against the wall and read Austrain Jane’s latest masterpiece.
      ‘Seems like you really like Austrain Jane’s works,’ Mecha Traveller said, trying to attract Jugo Shaowtest’s attention.
      Jugo Shaowtest ignored the c...

    • Under goes West
      ‘Hora, Remember the glove that we hung in our underground office?’ Mr. P.P. said, ‘I got it with me.’
      ‘Why did you get it? *cough* I always used it to hold the hot kettle when pouring tea,’ Emily Bronchitis replied.
      ‘I have finally found a kid who can use it,’ Mr. P.P. said, ’I lost him for now but I think we can meet him if we cross Fang Shy.’
      ‘*cough*, Our best bet would be to avoid the Cavity altogether and *cough* instead take the gentler Eastern slopes,’ Emily Bronchitis said and opened up ...


  • 6 Negative turning point
    Kn did not know that El uses HH to defeat his enemy

    - Kn is defeated
    ? PP’s plan foiled
    ? GM’s plan foiled
    ? VLR plans foiled


    • Kn and GM take shelter in Buccal
      It had started to rain pretty heavily. Knudalce and Gopi Manchuri had taken shelter inside a cave. The map that Knudalce had bought at Tartar showed that the cave was a part of a larger network of caves. This network was known as Cavity Caves.
      ‘Knudalce, are you sure of this place where we will find the portal,’ Gopi Manchuri asked.
      ‘I am in the same state as you are. I do not know for sure,’ Knudalce replied, ‘I can only trust the words of Hungry Turkey and the limericks of Captain Berty.’
      Gopi...

    • Kn GM meet SR
      It took a long time for Knudalce to light the damp firewood they had collected earlier. It was still raining but not as heavily as the last night. Knudalce and Gopi Manchuri walked through the Cavity. It would at the very least help them cross Northward. For most of the stretch, the cave walls prohibited light and water from coming inside. At times, there were cracks and openings which had opened up quite wide due to years of weathering. The caves walls were pretty smooth inside. Gopi Manchuri r...

    • El and OMD meet with Kn and GM
      God El sat on a large rock, that bordered Rebound Falls, the largest waterfall in Toothache. Old McDonald, along with two of his E.I.E.I.O men were with him. One of them held an umbrella that protected God El’s head from the tiny droplets of water that rebound after crashing on the rocks. They were waiting for a swanew who had not heeded the ban that was placed in the whole of Toothache.
      ‘Are you sure he is coming this way?’ God El asked Old McDonald.
      ‘Alice Wonderland is never wrong, The Venera...

    • JNT meets JS
      ‘I can’t believe you were such a fool,’ Jugo Nor Theist scolded his underling.
      ‘I am sorry, boss,’ Jugo Shaowtest said. He was indeed sorry for letting his prisoners go.
      ‘They were audacious enough to sign on your forehead. How dare they?’ Jugo Nor Theist said. ‘Here, take this handkerchief. Erase that stupid scribble from your sorry face.’
      ‘Eh boss. This is the autograph of Austrain Jane. I would like to…’
      ‘Shut up you inferior Jugo!’ Jugo Nor Theist was so angry that he screamed. ‘You better e...

    • VLR makes to Dentine. Und cross.
      The head and members of Viva la Resistance, who hadn’t been captured by Alice Wonderland travelled towards Dentine. It was a risky thing but that was all they could have done. All the stock of Gall de Liver’s special ale were blown up by the fire and Captain Berty needed it to function. It was a special preparation that wasn’t available even the franchisees.
      Captain Berty was escorted by Subordinate L, Q and V in alphabetical order.
      ‘Subordinate Q, are you sure that the lady isn’t following us,’...

    • CB can't finish his statement
      The VRL is in a panic. While a few stay back, a few gallop towards GdL to get his fix.

    • CB braks down
      ‘Give up you thickheads,’ Alice Wonderland said, ‘I have heard enough of your bad poems and thickheadedness.’
      ‘O Captain! My Captain! What should we do?’ Subordinate L asked.
      ‘O loyal followers, behold the malice
      Let’s not forget our goal - the palace
      Charge with your might,
      Let's put on a fight.
      Hmm…’
      ‘Hmm...hmm…,’ Captain Berty was lost. He scratched his head. Then he scratched his beard, Finally, he scratched his belly. He couldn't scratching believe himself! He was unable to rhyme the last l...

    • El injures GM
      El and GM face off with HH. GM hurts his hands. El shoots a beam and GM is tossed into the forest

    • Kn is "helped" by El
      Kn gets a ride to the gate. El says that he would not want a swanew in Tooth and hence would escort Kn out of the country.

      - El shoots him.


  • 7 Antagonist Wins
    Kn is trapped in mines. He escapes but is badly wounded.
    - He learns that he must trust his friends.


    • Kn is sent to the mines
      What are the mines?

      This is the place where a lot of swanews were murdered.

    • 7.2 Kn meets GdL's son and mother
      PP’s brother explains who his father and his brother was.

      Kn learns the history of mines. How PF excavated the area and made it into a mine.

      He learns that the jailer holds another HH.

    • There was a huge commotion in the
      It was Knudalce’s third day in Minefield and he already got to see something exciting.
      There was a huge commotion in the mine pit. Two beefy looking men started a argument. As soon as the first one landed his fist on the second, people gathered around. Knudalce dropped his pickaxe and stood in the front row. It always baffled him how a large group of silent spectators always made a perfect circle to barricade the show at the centre.
      ‘I said I do not want any more of your porridge,’ the first one...

    • Kn and IdL talk
      ‘Are you related to Gall de Liver?’ Knudalce asked.
      ‘So even you know him? I hate to call him my father. That guy is the reason why that God El is even alive.’
      ‘Have you ever considered that he might be doing this to keep you and your mother safe?’ Knudalce asked.
      ‘Maybe. But that still doesn’t take away his sins.’
      ‘Your father is very well known, but not as a swanew. He brews drinks and sells them to his franchisee outlets. He is one of the biggest businessmen in Toothache. In fact even our vil...

    • group plans an escape
      PP’s brother stirs up a fight while Kn sneaks into the office to steal his HH.

    • The bawal
      Kn is sent to isolation but not before throwing the HH out of the window. It is caught by xx.

      He is released after a week of isolation.

    • JNT and JS checks the scene of crime
      … and frees the prisoners.

      Lesson: Kn realises that he needs trustworthy friends for his quest.

    • GM's story
      Knudalce is injured for the second time. PP’s brother carries him out of the mines as the mines descend into chaos.

    • The history of PP
      GdL wants a compensation. The guys hear horses. They are afraid that EIEIO will attach them.


  • 8 Revelation
    The story rounds up. Kn meets his mentor, GM meets PP. Kn knows that he has a large life force.
    - Kn learns that he has a lot of life force.
    - Kn learns how to use HH
    - Kn and GM learns El’s weakness


    • McD and Alice chase Captain Berty
      The gunpowder in Old McDonald’s shotgun imploded and damaged the barrel. It also blackened Old McDonald’s face. In tremendous fury, he threw it in Captain Berty’s direction and unsheathed his longsword.
      ‘Old guy, your heart is filled with malice.
      Your God while he rules in his palace
      Made of matchsticks
      Would get a few kicks,
      Err.. err..’
      Something had happened to Captain Berty. It was unusual for him to falter. His tremendous aim with his Dragon’s breath and his unwavering limericks had kept th...

    • 8.1 Kn and Items
      GM escapes into the deciduous forest. PP and his gang saves him.

    • 8.2 Kn meets SC
      PP tells about his brother’s intent to establish democracy.

      PP tells him that they should camp by the gate. PP can extract revenge on El and GM can meet Kn

    • 8.4 EIEIO vs VRL
      OMD and Alice capture Captain Berty. OMD gets a call from God El and leaves Berty to Alice Wonderland.

    • At GdL
      Subordinate V and W.B. Yeast had to carry Captain Berty into the tasting chamber of Gall de Liver’s factory. The tasting chamber was more like a nice cozy restaurant. It was made so that sensible business dealings could be made under the influence of a good brew. Captain Berty was in no condition for participating in sensible business dealings. He was sobbing most of the time.
      ‘Oh my god! Brussel Sprouts? What happened to you?’ Gall de Liver came out of the room where boilers and brass vessels p...


  • 9 Protagonist Wins
    Kn defeats El, Kn and GM talk and escape.
    - Kn is armed with knowledge.
    - Kn gets a new companion GM


    • 9.1 The travel towards the gate
      All travel towards the gate. Kn wants to cross it. GM wants to help Kn + find his dad. All others want to fight.

    • 9.2 Kn faces off El
      Kn is saved because his life force counters the damages made by electricity.

      El damages himself and turns insane.

      This is a chaotic segment with multiple people clashing.

    • All the guys come together
      GM laments that he couldn’t find his father in the mines.

    • 9.3 Kn and GM talk
      to Kn and GM

    • Alice, PP and Items bid farewell
      They exit portal A. The novel ends as they fall.

    • SC meets Kn and GM once more
      Gopi Manchuri was wearing one of Knudalce’s clothes. His ones were dirty and had a large hole right at the chest. The borrowed clothes were tad bit larger for him. As a result, he was able to sweep the dust around him while he walked around. He used his old torn clothes to fashion a sling bag so that he could carry stuff on his shoulders. He had kept the Helping Hand, which had some rock shards stuffed in its fingertips that were pressed tight with pieces of cloth, and some extra rock shards in ...

    • The other side
      Knudalce and Gopi Manchuri were falling from the sky. Well, apparently that was the case. The portal was at the mouth of a cave, situated underneath a rocky overhang of what appeared to be a nearly vertical wall of a mountain. The mouth was angled downward. As a result our hero and his side dish were plummeting straight to the ground, which at that point was at least thirty-two seconds away under standard gravitational acceleration, the density variation of air through height and the body profil...


  • 10 Extras


    • The incident: The night, 12 years ago
      The leader of the Kishimen slept with his wife and one month old baby. There was a knock on the door. The wife, who went by the name Taglia Telle, got up. and while rubbing her eyes, proceeded to open the door. She had been getting very less sleep. The baby, whom they had named Knudalce, kept her awake.
      She opened the door and was surprised. It was her own elder son standing. Ten years ago, he had left his home to learn about all the swanewship while travelling around the world. These ten years ...

    • The incident: Thukpa escapes
      When Thukpa stepped on Bacterium Islands, he knew that travelling the seas, scaling the mountains and opening multiple portals on the way caused him to spend quite a lot of his life force. He did not know how long he would live. Ten more years perhaps. This was the place where he had grown up as a child. He was returning after a century.
      At least he knew that Knudalce would grow up to fend for himself by the time he died. Maybe then he will tell how a man called Pasta Ferry was in search of Gold...

    • The History of Toothache: God El
      God El did not like the man who headed E.I.E.I.O. Captain Bertrand Russell Sprouts, or B. Russell Sprouts as his underlings called him, was a man of principle. He had so much more control over the military that sometimes God El felt as if he was just a proxy Wisdom Teeth.
      B. Russell Sprouts did not think the same way as God El. To him, whatever he did was duty. To him, that duty must be performed with the highest integrity. To him, that duty preceded his family commitments. That one time when t...

    • The History of Toothache: Pasta Ferry
      Pasta Ferry arrived as an omen to Toothache. He heard that God El, The Wisdom Tooth of Toothache was in need of a good swanew. He was also warned that the last royal swanew, Cod Lever Oyl was fed to a mountain lion. He was willing to take a risk. He had a solid mitigation placed. With the amount of life force he had fed himself, it would be a trivial task to kill even a whale.
      Pasta Ferry requested an audience with God El, which he was granted. God El was more than happy to invite another swanew...